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RE: Roommates

in The Ink Well10 months ago

Now we can't really tell if this was a wrong accusation or not but 7 bottles of oil is a lot to have been stolen by one person. Perhaps she didn't travel down with it like you thought.

Anyways, it would be nice to give these room mates a name as this is a story. It is hard keeping up with the room mate 1 and 2 names that you gave them. It's good to see you try out in theinkwell community but you still have a lot of skills to learn about story telling. Hopefully you'd stick around to learn.