Adam's Ravishing Moment.

in The Ink Well2 years ago (edited)


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His heart raced a million miles when the call came In. He ran out of his office like a madman towards his car and drove off with a screech. The police chased him when he 'refused' to stop. No... he couldn’t stop!

There was only one thing on his mind; “I have to get to the hospital as quickly as possible. I have to be there. I have to…" he shuddered. Moving the accelerator, he pressed on the car pedal as he speeds along until he got to the hospital.

Adam and his wife had been married for five good years without a child and in their sixth year something wonderful happened. It was a double blessing. His wife Diana fainted when they were having dinner at one of the high profiled restaurants in London. This happened 10 months ago.

He panicked, but pulled himself together and made sure she safely got to the hospital for a test. That was when his wife was diagnosed followed by an announcement that he's going to be a father! It wasn’t just a father of one, but two! How wonderful!

He felt like a newbie astronaut who was chosen to fly to space. Goodness me! He cried like a baby that night. He cried so hard that his wife ended up kissing him so passionately just to shush him up.

The doctor gave them instructions; things they should do and shouldn’t, the food she was to eat, the exercises to be taken, the Antenatal program, and all. He listened to every word the doctor said like they were a sermon.

He never missed out on any appointment they had. He was super happy and so was his wife. The news was unexpected as they had tried for years so, hearing and seeing the scan of their babies made them realize that everything is real.

Now, all they had to do was wait. He watched her body change so fastly. The baby bump that began to show. He watched as his wife woke him up every night for her cravings. How the babies moved and always listens to him when he speaks to them. It was beautiful... So beautiful that they were both in a hurry to carry their babies.

They went shopping, prepared the nursery room together, and worked on names to be given to their miraculous babies. Adam read every book on parenting and guidance. He learned how to play new games, got a train track and trains to play games with his kids, God knows he has a lot to teach them, playing train has been one of his childhood fantasy which is why he decided to be a construction Engineer and things had been so amazing for him and his lovely wife Diana who was a caterer.

Life was beautiful for them as they await the month given to them of his wife's delivery. Sadly, the babies never came. He was alarmed and took his wife to the hospital where the doctor told them they had to wait until the wife starts having contractions. He was scared even though the doctor said everything was fine, “Oh, that’s what they say” he hadn’t been able to sleep as he would check on his wife breathing continually. From the way he acted, it would be hard to believe he wasn’t the pregnant one.

Countless times his wife teased him on how utterly protective he would be of their babies especially if they were girls.

Guys would have to stay off if they want to live.

Getting off his car, he walked toward the hospital building not minding the police blares that were heard. He knew he would have to be arrested but that wasn't in the list of his problems at the moment. He has been waiting for too long for this day and it couldn’t be missed out on.

When his wife called him that she was at the hospital, he lost all sense of reasoning as his heart started skipping beats. His mind yelled at him; “You’ve got to be there for her” and now he was here. After getting directions from the receptionist, he quickly ran towards the elevator and waited not so patiently for the ding sound. The elevator was too slow for his liking. He wished he could FLY.


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Immediately the ding sound was heard, he walked toward the Delivery Room where he met with some nurses in charge. They gave him a gown and had his hands sanitized before he walked into the delivery room.

Seeing his wife's face made him pause for a second. She was in pain. He could hear it and feel the sound that left her lips vibrating on the wall of his soul.

Holding her hands, he spoke sweet words to her, encouraging her and rubbing her palms. That seems to work as the pain that surged into his body made him scream as his wife gave a long push as the doctor ordered, but the pain left immediately when he heard a tiny voice. He didn’t need a balm to bring tears to his eyes, or an onion, she pushed again and another had come out.

Adam was astounded. He couldn’t believe what his eyes were seeing. He was sure he wouldn’t recover from the beauty that was bestowed on him by his wife, pushing out again, the placenta came out and he found himself sighing deeply.

Looking at his wife, he kissed her so passionately until the doctor chased him out as they needed to clean her up. Going out of the ward, he met with the policemen who also witnessed what was going on. They had gave him a ticket and warned him, but not after congratulating him for becoming a father.

Adam walked into the hospital alone but walked out with his lovely wife and babies, a boy and a girl who they named William and Rose. He was smiling ear to ear as he walked toward his car with his wife and babies.

Opening the car for his new family, he stepped, he made sure everyone was seated positioned safely before stepping on the pedal. This time around, he didn’t speed. He drove as calmly as possible. Not just because he's scared of getting ticketed by the Police. He just doesn't have a reason to FLY anymore.

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I love any story with a happy birth in it! I'd say getting there in time was worth the ticket! Adam's wife is one tough lady, if my husband had tried to kiss me passionately right after I gave birth, I'd have thought he was nuts! Then again, it sounds like she had a smooth labor, mine was anything but smooth with my son 🤣 (he was a 9lb 13oz baby, really chubby bub!) This is such a sweet tale of a couple getting their dear wish multiplied by two, made me smile! Thanks for sharing sis ❤️ !PIZZA

Hehe, Adam must be nuts for doing that 😂😂. I do agree happy ending just boosts up the happy hormone.

Wow, he must have been that chubby if my imagination still works like a sane person. You are an amazing soul Grin and I know your family and friends will be super glad they have you in their lives cos I am.☺☺

When a suspenseful tale, which delivered a happy ending :) May I suggest that you try to spice up your already entertaining stories with dialogue?

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Oh yeah, I will work on that, thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your presence.

Thanks so much for your great stories, please do keep them coming 🙌

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Sure will 🤗🤗🤗 and also put in more effort... Thank ya

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Thank God it ended well because I was reading and adding a bit of Nollywood bad omens to it. Lol😂

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Adam is the perfect distraught dad! He’s so focused on his child’s (children’s) birth that he can’t actually think straight. The speed at which he flys to his appointment with fate is perfectly offset by the speed of the delivery. Nice idea and good use of the prompt. Very sweet!

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Hehe, Adam's love for his unborn children do tell he will be an amazing dad. Thanks for the constant visits, I do appreciate this

Beautiful story, beautiful writing. That moment Adam and his wife (especially Adam) had waited for for years finally came. Few things give a man satisfaction and fufilment as becoming a father, you know, the joys, the thrills. I'm glad the agonizing wait was over for Adam and he finally felt those.

By way of suggestion, I think you should pay close attention to typos & errors in your work (especially tensal errors) before you publish, they can ruin literature a great deal. Thanks for your story.

Thanks for your words Aloy, I appreciate your presence here. And thanks for the suggestion given.

You're welcome.

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Happy Christmas Dear May the Birth of Our Lord Jesus Christ 🙏 Bring us All Favours,peace, joy and Everything Good 🙏💃🏼
Beautiful 🥰 story as they behold there bundle of Joy
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Thanks Sommy and I do appreciate your kind words, Merry Christmas and a prosperous New year ahead 🤗🤗.

Amen 🙏
Best wishes 😃
You are highly welcome 💕🙏

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thanks for a really sweet story - you portray the priority change of a new father nicely.

would you mind if I suggested one of the writing tips for you to consider? It's this one

for me, working on this aspect of story telling, has made for more immersive reading.

Thanks so much for reading, I appreciate the link shared and I have looked into it and digested it, I will put in more effort in my next post... Thank ya🤗🤗

I was so glued to the end and in the middle, I thought the story won't favour Adam's family, but I was happy for them because they finally got what they have been waiting for.

A baby is a big blessing from the Lord, we are always full of joy when will receive such a gift.

I do agree, a baby is indeed a gift from God, thanks for stopping by and your kind words.

You welcome dear

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Wow wow wow. 😍 I love the story. I certainly do. If only I have the power to upvote more, I would surely do. Good thing it ends very well. Just a happy ending for the twins and their excited parents.

Got here from @dreemport. ❤

Hehe...thank ya Mayt, I appreciate your kind hearted words, they did bright my day. You've done more than enough 🤗🤗.

Want to read more of it. 😊 Keep it up!

I will dear, I will haha😁😁😁... Thank ya.

This is such a great and wholesome story!
I'm glad Adam's wife had a safe and successful delivery, for a second there I thought something bad happened😅

And seeing everything that happened, the police still gave him a ticket?! That's outrageous

Haha, they had to, he disobeyed the law but then it was an happy ending😁😁😁... Thank ya for stopping by.

Indeed, he doesn't have any reason to fly because he has gotten what he was running after earlier. I love the end part and after five years, they welcomed two lovely babies. Amazing storyline 😎😎

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Thanks for stopping by dreemer, I appreciate your kind words 🤗🤗.

It's my pleasure 😊

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Twins ... I was not expecting that!
Merry Christmas Balikis🎅⛄🎄

Haha... I wasn't too😂😂 but hey it cool... Merry Christmas Teng, have missed ya fluffy sounds 😁😁.

yeah I need to be fluffy again in 2023!

Hehe, looking forward to that 😁.

hehe gotta to get you in the mood for mischief after all!

Haha, I love ya 😁😁

That's a beautiful story there.... The chills sent when babies are delivered are so so unreal...
You just feel on top of the world for real.

I'm happy Adam later got to be a father and the family guy completed at last because no matter how we see it, family is never complete except when babies arrive.
Thanks for the beautiful post
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I do agree with ya Spero, thanks for stopping by, your words shines like a star🤗🤗


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