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RE: Adam's Ravishing Moment.

in The Ink Well2 years ago (edited)

Beautiful story, beautiful writing. That moment Adam and his wife (especially Adam) had waited for for years finally came. Few things give a man satisfaction and fufilment as becoming a father, you know, the joys, the thrills. I'm glad the agonizing wait was over for Adam and he finally felt those.

By way of suggestion, I think you should pay close attention to typos & errors in your work (especially tensal errors) before you publish, they can ruin literature a great deal. Thanks for your story.

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Thanks for your words Aloy, I appreciate your presence here. And thanks for the suggestion given.

You're welcome.

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