The history of the tattoo and what it means for each society is very interesting and extensive, you have made a good summary but when we take bibliographic information to make a review we must put the source of that information, because paraphrasing is considered a form of plagiarism.
You are urged to add the citations and sources from where you read the information.
In addition to that, your images are not copyright free, use the pages that are mentioned in the community anchored guidelines.
If you follow the instructions your hive experience will be a pleasant one.