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RE: Adam's Ravishing Moment.

in The Ink Well • 2 years ago

thanks for a really sweet story - you portray the priority change of a new father nicely.

would you mind if I suggested one of the writing tips for you to consider? It's this one

for me, working on this aspect of story telling, has made for more immersive reading.

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         2 years ago 

        Thanks so much for reading, I appreciate the link shared and I have looked into it and digested it, I will put in more effort in my next post... Thank ya🤗🤗

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