I find this poem deeply problematic.

You reinforce traditional gender roles and stereotypes by criticising the woman based on society's expectations of cleanliness and domesticity, suggesting woman should be good housekeepers and mothers at all costs, and nothing else.

You are harsh and judgement, reflecting on her personal choices by shaming her because she doesn't mean standards of femininity and morality. Would you judge a man the same way?

You imply a moral judgement because of her sexual choices and multiple marriages. This scrutiny undermines her character and I am sure you would not judge a man in this way.

You also comment on her age - this is ageist and sexist and suggest her worth is tied to youth and beauty and without these she's less valuable.

You don't reflect on why she might be economically dependent on selling herself and you refelct a believe that a woman's worth is tied to her relationships rather than her individual capabilities.

It's a poem that blames the victim, as if she deserves her current state, failing to consider systemic factors.

I could go on. Even if it was well written, I would criticize and challenge the attitudes in this poem. Wpman's lives go beyond such reductive and judgemental stereotypes.