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RE: 5 minute freewrite 2260 prompt test subject

in Freewriters11 months ago

This is lovely! I have chills!! I'm not sure to whom you speak, sometimes I think it's your husband, others a daughter, but it's very beautiful. Sometimes you blow me away. This is one of those times.

Is this a metaphor?:

I tried my best to not let you post, but
you knew your way around all of my cliches
so, it is there posted for the world to see.

I love your poetry. It's very raw and genuine, chock-a-block with love.

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Thank you for the lovely comment, I am talking about my phone and how one day we might be able to connect our minds to our phones. There is no metaphor, That is just how it came to me to write it. My thought was when you want to post something and your phone messes up and does not let you post but you figure it out and get it posted and find out you should not have posted it, maybe the phone knew this was going to happen and was trying to tell you by keeping you from posting. It was just a silly poem. I wrote it before seeing the prompt and was going to save it for another day but the prompt fit.

oh my goodness I got that so far wrong! No wonder I was confused about that bit - I was trying to make my interpretation work! haha thanks for the explanation! I love it even more now!

So you write poetry in your spare time? How about posting some more of that? Blockchain poets community?

No, I do not write poetry, I was bored and tired of playing a game on my phone so I thought I would try to write a future freewrite but I saw the prompt would fit so I used it in the post. It was supposed to come across as if the phone was trying to talk to me and in the future we unlock that part of our brain that lets us talk to computers. Thank you for liking it.