i dont really understand the lyrics because that is not my language but i did watch the whole video and i liked how you developed the character, starting slower and giving it more strenght with the music...
correct me if i'm wrong but the other girl gives a sense of duality to the story telling, i loved the scene with the water followed with the fire, it tells how the girls are opossites but at the same time one takes care of the other... i liked that duality