I gave you an upvote but I have a criticism. If you are going to use the word "She", use the first name of the character that refers to her. In this case it is Lynn Lincoln, isn't it?
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I gave you an upvote but I have a criticism. If you are going to use the word "She", use the first name of the character that refers to her. In this case it is Lynn Lincoln, isn't it?