A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words BROKEN PROMISES THAT DESTROY LOVE / CUANDO EL CASTILLO DEL AMOR SE DERRUMBA

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ENGLISH VERSION

WHAT DO I SEE

In this image you can see a woman who is going to go to that castle and as you see the drawn sword, she possibly does not go with good intentions and the carrion birds portend something bad.

WHAT IS WHAT I FELL

There it looks as if there was frustration, anger and the birds were expressing something very bad that could happen, expressing future sadness and desolation.

WHEN THE CASTLE OF LOVE COLLAPSES

Although love is strong and eternal
Trusting us that your beloved will always be there
But love breaks if you neglect it
Screams and lack of details that your love mistreats
In the end, love will inevitably escape you

Although a castle of love is built
If you don't take care of it, it can collapse.
On the outskirts of your dear love
Birds wait to devour it
Destroying every last brick
That love that you thought could only last

If you neglect your beloved jewel
One day you might wake up surprised
Discovering that with an unforgiving sword
Weapon of forgetfulness, disappointment and disappointments
Your beloved will hold it with a determined look
Destroying the castle of infinite love
This way you will never be able to repair love

Be careful that it doesn't happen to you
Take care of your loved one like a precious jewel
So she won't want to be away from his side
She will return you with caresses and passionate love.
Every detail that his love lights up

Thus the castle will grow even more and more eternally
Scaring away malicious birds that lurk
Envious of the love that you reflect with it
So no one will ever take it from your hands

VERSION EN ESPAÑOL

QUE ES LO QUE VEO

En esta imagen se ve una mujer que va a ir a ese castillo y como se ve la espada desenfundada posiblemente no va con buenas intenciones y las aves carroñeras presagian algo malo.

QUE ES LO QUE SIENTO

Allí se ve como si hubiera frustración rabia y las aves expresaran algo muy malo que puede pasar, expresando tristeza y desolación futuras.

CUANDO EL CASTILLO DEL AMOR SE DERRUMBA

Aunque el amor es fuerte y eterno
Confiandonos que tú amada siempre allí estará
Más el amor resquebraja si lo llegas a descuidar
Gritos y falta de detalles que tú amor maltratas
El amor al final sin remedio se te escapara

Aunque un castillo de amor este construido
Si no se cuida se puede llegar a derrumbar
A las afueras de tu amor querido
Aves esperan para poderlo devorar
Destruyendo hasta el último ladrillo
Ese amor que pensabas que solo podía perdurar

Si a tu joya amada la descuidas
Un día te podrías despertar sorprendido
Descubriendo que con una espada inclemente
Arma de olvidos, decepción y desengaños
La empuñara tú amada con la mirada decidida
Destruyendo el castillo de amor infinito
Así más nunca al amor podrás reparar

Cuidado que no te llegue a pasar
Cuiden a su amada como una joya preciada
Así ella lejos de su lado no querrá estar
Ella te devolvera con caricias y amor apasionado
Cada detalle que el su amor enciende

Así el castillo aún más y mas crecera eterno
Auyentando aves maliciosas que acechan
Envidiosas del amor que con ella reflejas
Así nunca nadie de tus manos se la llevara

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You need to nurture love so that it doesn't escape or slip through your fingers. A great poem.

Love is very strong but once broken it is very difficult to put it back together.

You described each detail of the picture in your poem. Even in English, it is good translated.

Thank you for the recognition every day striving to be better

You are doing great!