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RE: Fiction: The echo of a "I hate you". A moment for redemption. Original content. EN/ESP.

in The Ink Well27 days ago

Tragedy and death are present in your story. It is a clear reminder of our mortality, in those last moments the father was able to say goodbye to the daughter he loved so much. A story that moves feelings.

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Excellent day.

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Hi @riconpoetico7, I'm so glad you liked the story.
I wanted, to make it very expressive, at the level of feelings and also giving a vision of a future after this existence.
Thanks so much for the comment
Happy Tuesday