This is lovely! I have chills!! I'm not sure to whom you speak, sometimes I think it's your husband, others a daughter, but it's very beautiful. Sometimes you blow me away. This is one of those times.
Is this a metaphor?:
I tried my best to not let you post, but
you knew your way around all of my cliches
so, it is there posted for the world to see.
I love your poetry. It's very raw and genuine, chock-a-block with love.