This is a really engaging short story! The interactions between Tamec and the Mulu vendor are both entertaining and tense, with a subtle undercurrent of danger that keeps the reader hooked. The way the Mulu seller plays with Tamec’s curiosity and naivety is clever, and the conversation flows naturally while hinting at the larger, more chaotic world around them. I love how you build the tension, especially with the vendor’s cryptic comments about safety and the city. The description of the Mulu, with its unique physical traits, adds an extra layer of intrigue to the setting. The twist at the end, with the pickpocket, is a great way to close the scene, making it feel like Tamec is just beginning to realize how unpredictable and dangerous his surroundings truly are. Overall, the dialogue is sharp, the pacing is tight, and the world you’ve created feels alive and full of hidden dangers. It’s a fun, thought-provoking read that leaves you wanting more! Great job!