Poema - Esta es mi oración / Poem - This is my prayer [ESP/ENG]

in Literatoslast year (edited)


'''֍֎֎[ESP]֍֎֎'''

Creo que todo verso o poema, tiene una historia que lo origina. O por lo menos, los que he escrito la tienen. El que comparto hoy, originalmente lo escribí para mi esposa, cuando aún no éramos novios. En él describo, como la conocí, algunos de los datos personales que ella me había descrito de sí misma; y por su puesto, el foco principal del poema era mostrarle mi interés y aspiración de conquistarla. Bueno, al parecer los versos surtieron efecto jejeje. Como aficionado, espero recibir, críticas y sugerencias. Estaré publicando algunos de los versos que le he escrito a ella, antes de publicar algunos materiales que estoy escribiendo específicamente para ser publicados aquí. Por eso, toda sugerencia es importante para mí. La foto que comparto es un selfi tomado con el móvil de mi esposa desde el WhatsApp, y desde allí la compartió conmigo, más menos en el mismo tiempo que escribí el poema. Y el documento, es el original del poema escrito de mi puño y letra. De antemano, gracias por sus sugerencias y por leer.

Esta es mi oración

Hace poco conocí, una chica en internet,
Vilma su nombre es y vive en el Mariel,
detallo sus datos Dios, para que
empieces a obrar, temprano en su corazón.

Dedico esta oración en versos hoy mi Señor,
pues quiero que sepas mi Rey,
que voy a intentar tomar,
para mí su corazón.

Robar no, pues pecar no haré mi corazón,
Digo tomar, pues de tus manos la quiero recibir Dios,
Resulta que sin querer esta semana apareció, y te confieso Señor,
Que al ver su foto quedé, encantado de su esplendor.

Señor, sé que tu hija ella es,
y mejor que yo, la conoces tu Señor,
pero callar no podré, así que repetiré,
Lo que tú sabes, Señor.

Es linda, inteligente e ingenua talvez Señor,
Pero a la vez es muy sabia, y prudente,
de eso cuenta me di yo; no le gusta la mentira,
y aunque el pan la engorda, le gusta mucho, mi Señor.

Es músico, es cantante y sobre todo, lo mejor,
es creyente en ti Señor; pensando en ello,
diga usted, si lo único que le falta a ella, ¿no soy yo? Mi Señor,
es por eso que te pido, mediante esta oración.

Que le hables, le ministres, le digas quién soy yo,
Que me des la oportunidad de conquistar su corazón,
Que me hagas su pareja, y tú sabes,
Porque no, también me hagas, tu Dios;

El padre de sus hijos, su esposo, su auxiliador,
Su refugio en la tristeza, su abrigo,
su protector, su guerrero,
su camarero, y su amante cada día Señor.

Y antes de despedir con un amén mi oración,
A ti Jesús la encomiendo, para que derrames tu amor,
Sobre su corazón afligido, e inundes con tu amor,
Que sin darse ella cuenta, como lo hizo Rut con Booz;

Se enamore de mi Señor, y despierte en su corazón,
una llama, un enorme deseo Señor,
De que llegue a ser su esposo, su amor; y un día a ti prometo,
Una vez más en oración o quién sabe si en canción.

Decir Dios, gracias por darme la bendición,
de a Vilma conocer, y confiármela por mujer,
y ahora si puedo despedir con un amén mi oración,
y si esforzado soy, sé que la bendición me darás, de atrapar su corazón.


'''֍֎֎[ENG]֍֎֎'''

I believe that every verse or poem has a story behind it. Or at least, the ones I have written have one. The one I share today, I originally wrote it for my wife, when we were not yet engaged. In it I describe how I met her, some of the personal information she had described to me about herself; and of course, the main focus of the poem was to show her my interest and aspiration to conquer her. Well, apparently the verses had an effect hehehe. As an amateur, I hope to receive criticism and suggestions. I will be posting some of the verses I have written to her, before posting some material I am writing specifically to be published here. So, every suggestion is important to me. The photo I am sharing is a selfi taken with my wife's cell phone from WhatsApp, and from there she shared it with me, around the same time I wrote the poem. And the document, is the original of the poem written in my own handwriting. In advance, thank you for your suggestions and for reading.

**This is my prayer**

I recently met a girl on the internet,
Vilma her name is and she lives in Mariel,
I detail her data God, so that
to begin to work, early in her heart.

I dedicate this prayer in verses today my Lord,
for I want you to know my King,
that I will try to take,
for me your heart.

Not to steal, for to sin I will not make my heart,
I say take, for from your hands I want to receive it God,
It turns out that unintentionally this week appeared, and I confess Lord,
When I saw her picture I was enchanted by her splendor.

Lord, I know that she is your daughter,
and better than me, you know her, Lord,
but I can't keep silent, so I'll repeat,
What you know, Lord.

She is pretty, intelligent and naive perhaps Lord,
But at the same time she's very wise, and prudent,
that's what I realized; she doesn't like lies,
and although bread makes her fat, she likes it very much, my Lord.

She is a musician, she is a singer and above all, the best,
is a believer in you Lord; thinking about it,
you say, if the only thing she lacks, isn't it me, my Lord? My Lord,
that's why I ask you, through this prayer.

That you speak to her, minister to her, tell her who I am,
That you give me the chance to conquer her heart,
That you make me his partner, and you know,
Why not, also make me, your God;

Her children's father, her husband, her helper,
Her refuge in sorrow, her shelter,
your protector, your warrior,
your waiter, and your lover every day Lord.

And before I dismiss my prayer with an amen,
To you Jesus I commend her, that you may shower your love,
On her afflicted heart, and flood her with your love,
That without her realizing it, as Ruth did with Boaz;

May she fall in love with me Lord, and awaken in her heart,
a flame, a great desire Lord,
That I may become her husband, her love; and one day to you I promise,
Once again in prayer or who knows if in song.

To say God, thank you for giving me the blessing,
Of knowing Vilma, and entrusting her to me as my wife,
and now if I can say goodbye with an amen to my prayer,
and if I'm trying hard, I know you'll give me the blessing, to catch her heart.

  • Fotos tomada por mi esposa y editas por mi en Photoshop y Photo Studio APK.
  • Photos taken by my wife and edited by me in Photoshop and Photo Studio APK.
  • Traducción al inglés desde www.deepl.com
  • English translation from www.deepl.com

 
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