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RE: Children and food from strangers

in The Ink Well2 months ago

Okayy.
Sorry about that.
I didn't really see the 'beating' as harsh but now I know better.

It's been corrected

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Thank you, but there is still this sentence in the story

Please stop beating them

Perhaps you can say simply, "Please stop". That would make sense. We all can imagine bad things are happening, but you don't actually say it.

We are going to curate your story in the expectation that you will make the change. Thank you.

Sorry for the stress.
It's been removed.
Thank you