A Picture Is Worth Winter in life / El invierno en la vida

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ENGLISH VERSION

WHAT I SEE: Here I see a forest that is full of ice in winter and two men who found firewood in the middle of that winter, which can give a bonfire that will give a fire that will warm in the middle of that winter.

WHAT I FEEL: Even in the middle of the coldest winter you can get the heat that is so intensely cold.

In our walk on uncertain paths
we seek the warmth of smiling prosperity
but without thinking the desperate cold arrives
sadness and sufferings grab you relentlessly

Thus comes devastating happy thoughts
the cold storm of problems that freeze
leaving the desolate heart in ice of sadness
freezing the feelings of joy in ice

When that storm rages with fury
thinking of burning the eternal cold
there is that saving heat like light in glory
the love that soothes the cold soul that yearns for fire

Thus with words of love I get the fire
with the firewood of your kisses and calm understanding
Lighting the flame of passionate hope
fanning the flame of that bonfire of love in your arms

That is why you are the island of fire that cancels out the Winters
With that spark that always lives even in the intense cold
Flame that I always look for to rekindle my dreams
Thus always fighting together for the glory of fire
Warmth of hope and life in eternal love

VERSION EN ESPAÑOL

QUE ES LO QUE VEO: Aquí veo un bosque que esta lleno de hielo en un invierno y dos hombres que encontraron leña en medio de ese invierno, que puede dar una fogata que dará un fuego que calentara en medio de ese invierno.

QUE ES LO QUE SIENTO: Aun en medio del invierno mas frio se puede conseguir el calor que ese frio tan intenso, así aun en el frio mas intenso que puede tener la tristeza puede llegar el calor de la risa .

LOS INVIERNOS DE LA VIDA Y EL CALOR DE LA ESPERANSA

En nuestro andar en caminos inciertos
buscamos el calor de la prosperidad sonriente
mas sin pensar llega el frio desesperado
las tristezas y sufrimientos te agarran inclementes

Así llega arrasando pensamiento felices
la fría tormenta de problemas que congelan
quedando en hielos de tristezas el corazón desolado
helando los sentimientos de alegría en hielo

Cuando esa tormenta arrecia con furia
pensando en abrasar al frio eterno
allí esta ese calor salvador como luz en gloria
el amor que apacigua el alma fría que anhela el fuego

Así con palabras de amor consigo el fuego
con la leña de tus besos y comprensión tranquila
Encendiendo la llama de la esperanza apasionada
avivando la llama de esa fogata de amor en tus brazos

Por eso eres la isla de fuego que anulas los inviernos
Con esa chispa que siempre vive aun en el frio intenso
llama que siempre busco para avivar mis sueños
asi siempre luchar juntos por la gloria del fuego
calor de esperanza y vida en amor eterno

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With wood, it's easy to secure fire and with fire there is warmth, in such atmosphere one can think right and perhaps have some lovely memories. Enjoyed reading your piece, well done 👏👏👏🤗

thank you for your words

You're welcome 🙏

You are such a talented writer. I love how you have infused the cold with feelings of the heart. Keep it up

If only one heart can make it think and reflect and touch the depths of its soul, inspiring it to enter into beautiful dreams and see new and wonderful paths, I have already achieved at least something, at least a life that I can change even for one day, it is wonderful.

Your write up gives hope to someone under an unpalatable situation. It's telling us not to lose hope but to see the brighter side of life. Thanks.

The successful ones are not those who always succeed, but those who, despite the obstacles, continue forward. Those are the great ones who achieve great things.

This is a beautiful poem!