Iroha Karuta 13: THIS Brings You Good Luck!

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The merry Japanese merchant in the top illustration of the thirteenth Japanese proverb in the Iroha Karuta series reminds of the Nine of Cups tarot card, which, in the Morgan-Greer interpretation of the Rider Waite tarot, depicts a medieval European type of "merry merchant" beaming beneath nine goblets.

The thirteenth card illustrates "wa," the thirteenth syllable in the traditional Japanese "Iroha" syllabary.

The proverb goes like this:

笑う門には福来る
Warau kado ni wa fuku kitaru

Let's break it down:

笑う = warau = laugh
門 = kado = gate

に = ni = at (or "through" in this context: in this proverb "ni" indicates the direction or the destination of an action)

は = wa = with regard to. "Wa" is a common "topic marker"

福 = fuku = good luck / good fortune

来る = kitaru = approach - a more poetic sense than the plain form "kuru" = come.

My Translations

I made three translations of this proverb, and then made a final adjustment to the second one to get to my final version...

Translation 1

Good luck comes through the gate of laughter.

This is a basic translation that attempts to get the sense of the original in plain English.

Translation 2

Laughter is the gate through which good luck enters.

In this translation I stuck more closely to the original Japanese word order:

Warau kado = Laughter is the gate

ni wa = through which

fuku = good luck

kitaru = comes

I was quite pleased with that effort.

Translation 3

This is a more compact version that omits the verb:

Laughter is the portal of good luck.

My Final Translation: Catching the Word Order AND the Syllable Count!

I noticed that my second translation consisted of eleven syllables while the original Japanese consists of twelve syllables. I therefore decided to give the gate a more poetic feeling by calling it a "portal" to create a translation with the same number of syllables as well as the same word order:

Laughter is the portal through which good luck enters. = 12 syllables

Wa-ra-u ka-do ni wa fu-ku ki-ta-ru = 12 syllables

I Challenge ChatGPT to Translate the Proverb

I asked ChatGPT to "translate and talk about a Japanese kotowaza that is the 13th in the iroha karuta card series."

ChatGPT immediately got it wrong by translating the first (and most famous) proverb in the series, so I offered another hint:

"Actually, the 13th begins with "wa"..."

This time, it got it right, but I felt that the translation was a bit off:

笑う門には福来る
(Warau kado ni wa fuku kitaru)
Literal translation: "Good fortune comes to the house that laughs."

I suggested,

"doesn't "kado" mean gate?"

To which ChatGPT replied:

You're absolutely right! "Kado" (門) does indeed mean "gate" in Japanese, so a more literal translation of 笑う門には福来る (Warau kado ni wa fuku kitaru) would be "Good fortune comes to the gate that laughs."

Hmm. It's not a great translation, is it. It seems to think that a literal gate is literally laughing whereas "gate" is a metaphor for that which enables good fortune to "enter" one's life, namely, laughter.

What about Google Translate?

I finished off by plugging the Japanese proverb into Google translate, and it gave me this compressed, but clear, interpretation:

Laughter brings good fortune.

Well done, Google Translate! That translation does the job of conveying the essential meaning without getting caught in the gate!

Cheers!

David Hurley
#InspiredFocus


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